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I think if you did anything else to it, you might spoil it. It is sweet and lovely the way it is. I enjoyed it very much.

I love it! I think that\'s a great place to leave it, unless maybe you want to add a prologue, maybe sev could sent a letter to harry saying \'marry me\'. That\'s just a maybe, I personally loved the way it ended, and I\'m glad you updated, I missed this story. It was splendiferous! MOO, love ya!

A cute story! Please keep on updating, or I shall be VERY cross. (Just kidding ^_^;)

Your story is good and I believe you should continue. I guess If I were you I\'d post my entire story, even if I only got three reviews...writers don\'t quit writing because people don\'t enjoy their work...they continue to write because it\'s like releasing a part of their soul ; it\'s like getting that thing out of your brain and making it something more than an idea.

Being an author, even a Harry Potter fanfiction Author, isn\'t about getting a thousand reviews and having everyone love you; it\'s about just plain writing.

Please continue^_^

Whitney

Remember --\"People do not write for others pleasure, But for their own pleasure in knowing they can do so.\"

Hi!
It was a nice chapter! You left me in a state of curiosity...and you know what they say about curiosity....LOL
I think that Severus isn\'t that OCC.I believe that everyone has his or hers bad days, so ...But Severus has a lot of angst in his life so it\'s natural that he is bitter and cynical. But I also believe that love can ease it.
So don\'t worry with, just keep writing.
See you soon.
Relic.

I love love LOVE this story! I hope you update soon!

Hey. I had to review. I am intrested I have to admitt.
usually I run in horror from the harry snape fics.
congrats on writing one that did not cause me to wretch with the sappyness.
usually people write snape sooo OOC I can\'t tollerate it.
thanks again for writng snape as his normal self
and giving the man some character development in your fic.
It is a great fic plcontinue to write I love your style and your lettters from harry to snape in the first chapter..
they remind me of something I wrote my ex trying to win him back. was that the idea???
or am I way off track please let me know.

with pocky and anti-writers block potions (j/k)

Tasumi

Poor Harry! I hope everything works out! Please update soon!

Nice work! It was good as a one-shot, sweet and longing. I\'m not sure how it\'ll work as a series.

anyway.

I liked the story and am glad you wrote a second installment. I have to say I\'m a sucker for happy endings so i hope the boys eventually get there!