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by uqui

person Anon
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
finally!!
you've updated
now do it again
person >haengbok<
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lovely update.

You've really gotten me addicted to this pairing. *sighs*
person Alexa
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You updated! YAY!!! I'm so glad!

Nice characterization going on in this chapter - you maintain a difference between Harry's views and Voldemort's. Nice... but I hope the differences won't keep them from being together, after all differences are needed to keep things fresh. Dumbledore is annoying as usual...

Veela - you know, there are so many stories about them, that they sort of got exessive coverage by now. So they aren't really interesting, or compelling to read about. Though I like the twist you added with the brothel - makes perfect sense. I do hope they won't take too much of the story...

I don't quite see why Voldemort would want to arradicate the goblins - sure that would help him expand his power base, and get better economical controll, but at the same time... wouldn't that be bad for the economic stability? Especially after the war? And wouldn't it hurt his wealthier supporters? Hm... well, actually, it might be easier to get it all over with while the the war is on. Well, either way you choose to do it I know will be good.

I hope they don't get him an owl... that would be too close to Hedwig. How about a different bird? An eagle? A Crow... I kinda think they might get a real surprize there if they ask Hagrid, of all people, for help in that matter... Which would be quite nice for comic relief (which I wouldn't mind having a little) :-)

P.S.: Did I mention before that I seriously hope Ginny doesn't become an integral part of their lives together? She may live and all (and that shows you how much I'm trying to be nice here), but just not interfere - emotionally, mentally, politically,... Please? You're the author and you decide, but Pleeeaaase?
person Susan
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This and Possession are absolutely amazing works and I was absorbed by the story almost immediately. You've created the characters so well (I really love how you portrayed Sirius and Remus though I feel sorry for Snape) and the story itself keeps the reader so interested with its plot twists and attention to detail. I hope that you continue Weapon soon.
person Kaitlin
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I've read Possesion and I woul like to thank you :'D. I'm looking forward to your next chapter. Patiently (hopefully). I was wondering: Is there any pattern to your updates?
person FallenAngel
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
anxiously waiting for the next installment.... this story is so cool!

FaLLeNaNGeL
person nickel
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Since it sounds as if you've had more sign-ups than reviews, I'm going to give you a 1-sentence ultra-honest review;

I LOVED THAT!>u/
person Samantha543
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update, please! :D
person YaoiOtaku
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! The first story and this story was amazing!!! Love the way you wrote it.
I don't usally read Harry Potter stories, but this.....got my attention! ^_^
Just update the story and let me know that you did. Like I said before, I don't usally read Harry Potter fanfics.
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person >haengbok<
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Personal comment: I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE YOUR STORY AND IS NOW A CONVERT FROM DRACO AND HARRY PAIRINGS TO VOLDIE AND HARRY PAIRINGS.


You're plot is genius and you are a brilliant mind. I love it like shit! Please update the stroy. I'm starving for more. It's just plain lovely to imagine everything you wrote. I hate Dumbledore and you made me hate him more. Though more explanations should be held but it's well enough as it is.

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