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July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hee Hee! Detention For being a very bad girl! Well, I guess he\'s justified isn\'t he? LOL Great fic!
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March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm in response i would say i was defending my right and thats that, but i thought and i didn\'t say my reveiw was bad but i was angry the way she wrote it and how i was now that i am corrected confused i was. I also retratced my satement but in my first reveiw if you look the only bad part was my beginnign you suck which I should have tuned down. I am used to saying it to my friends in a friendly manner (and yes the say it back to much the same way). I did ask for clarificationand i questioned the whole rape assult feeling thing in which i got a reply. Well with that said i wipe hands clean of the whole thing and walk away.
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March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wooo!
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I really liked that ^_-
You should work on putting it in paragraphs though
And try not to use the same words over and over again...okay?
It was good though...^_^
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I really liked that ^_-
You should work on putting it in paragraphs though
And try not to use the same words over and over again...okay?
It was good though...^_^
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March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked it. It\'s really not original, but good all the same. Please write another, great imagination, don\'t be intimidated by all the great writers. I was for a bit, but got over it. Now I have four stories up.
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February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, do the detention thing! I can just see it ... \"well, miss granger. you\'ve been a VERY bad girl. you need to be punished.\" stuff like that. i like this story(= But you HAVE to do the detention scene. If you do, could you email me?
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February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! Congratulations on your first published story. I like the little twist at the end, showing that she\'s still a student, etc. So when is your next story? Thanks for sharing this!
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February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
He gave her head after he was finished? Boy is he a nice guy. Most men would just fall asleep at that point. Nice story by the way.~Pink~
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February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was really good. I liked the imagery. The only thing I would suggest is that you put a space in between paragraphs. The font here is so small it makes all the lines run together and I get stuck reading the same three sentences over and over and over. But, that\'s it. I loved it otherwise
Mirina
Mirina