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October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
really addicting story. Keep writing, I'm really enjoying it.
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October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Imp just imp like madonna or whatever her name is. I wuv the fic continue writing.
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October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That chapter was wonderful!!! I loved the part when Draco "apologizes". I think this is my favorite story so far. And please, please, I beg you, please, pretty please, update soon!!!!!! Great chapter and I really, really, really love your Draco.
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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This fic is fabulous!! I wasn't too taken with it at first, because Hermione seemed a bit OOC. But it really grew on me, and I *really* love how you've characterized Draco, and their interactions. I can't wait for the more angsty, dark stuff- I love that kind of thing. Keep up the great work, I can't wait to read more!
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September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is that this story is amazing. I love the dialogue between the characters the most, a great combination of humor and cunning. Great work.
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September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I've been reading your story for quite some time, but haven't had the time to drop a review. Now that I finally have five minutes, I'm more than glad to write a few lines.
First, wonderful story. Congratulations for the extreamly polished and detailed plot, the wonderful details, the marvelous big picture, the very In-Character charries and the humor mix. It's the closest thing to perfection in a fanfic and you deserve a prize of some sort for writing it. I love your portrail of Hermione, although I can't really imagine her doing the puppy eyes scene with Ron. BTW, Ron's a great deal how I imagine him and the rest of the Weasleys, too. I can't wait till you write the Picnic/Sleepover party. Draco is absolutely charming in this story, I like the side stories that go with him (the girls he goes out with that later on go to Hermione to confort them). I've read Draco, the amazing bouncing...Rat? by Maya and indeed, your portrail of the Slytherin does resembles the one from the story. Though your Draco doesn't have a weird and obsessive addiction for coffee, lol. Or maybe it does have and we don't know yet? >> Blaise is such a mystery. I'm very much expecting something more about him and why is Hermione acting so... instictively passive towards him. Something from the past, maybe? I can't wait!
Second, oh my Lord, the plot! I love it. As uneventful this story is, it does have a very eventful past-plot, or something like that and I just love the way it surfaces in the story, confusing the hell out of the readers as well out of the characters. Hmm... Seems like the writer is the only God in this story, since you controll your characters and their story so well. The way the dark past blends in with the confusing future and the "uneventful" present is just perfect. Don't worry about explaining too many things, I was pretty confused with how come they led such normal lives after the war and the explanation was a very satisfying one. The timing was also perfect, since if it would have appeared sooner in the story it would have been typical and slightly cliche (as all authors try to explain the world their characters are moving in and most of them do it too soon in the story) and later on, the suspense would have eventually killed all readers or at least bored me. :P
Third, finally smut! And a likeable one, too. Great closet shag, although typical. It had that slight tinge of the obsessively cliched and used, but with the right amount of talent (in your case, monumental), you managed to built it right. I rolled my eyes as soon as I read the line in which he pulls her into the closet. But I love this story way too much to just close the window and scream CLICHE! So I went on reading and liked it. Good for you, you made something recycled look good ;).
Well, hope you liked this piece of my mind, I have to run. Update ASAP and good luck finding a job! XX
First, wonderful story. Congratulations for the extreamly polished and detailed plot, the wonderful details, the marvelous big picture, the very In-Character charries and the humor mix. It's the closest thing to perfection in a fanfic and you deserve a prize of some sort for writing it. I love your portrail of Hermione, although I can't really imagine her doing the puppy eyes scene with Ron. BTW, Ron's a great deal how I imagine him and the rest of the Weasleys, too. I can't wait till you write the Picnic/Sleepover party. Draco is absolutely charming in this story, I like the side stories that go with him (the girls he goes out with that later on go to Hermione to confort them). I've read Draco, the amazing bouncing...Rat? by Maya and indeed, your portrail of the Slytherin does resembles the one from the story. Though your Draco doesn't have a weird and obsessive addiction for coffee, lol. Or maybe it does have and we don't know yet? >> Blaise is such a mystery. I'm very much expecting something more about him and why is Hermione acting so... instictively passive towards him. Something from the past, maybe? I can't wait!
Second, oh my Lord, the plot! I love it. As uneventful this story is, it does have a very eventful past-plot, or something like that and I just love the way it surfaces in the story, confusing the hell out of the readers as well out of the characters. Hmm... Seems like the writer is the only God in this story, since you controll your characters and their story so well. The way the dark past blends in with the confusing future and the "uneventful" present is just perfect. Don't worry about explaining too many things, I was pretty confused with how come they led such normal lives after the war and the explanation was a very satisfying one. The timing was also perfect, since if it would have appeared sooner in the story it would have been typical and slightly cliche (as all authors try to explain the world their characters are moving in and most of them do it too soon in the story) and later on, the suspense would have eventually killed all readers or at least bored me. :P
Third, finally smut! And a likeable one, too. Great closet shag, although typical. It had that slight tinge of the obsessively cliched and used, but with the right amount of talent (in your case, monumental), you managed to built it right. I rolled my eyes as soon as I read the line in which he pulls her into the closet. But I love this story way too much to just close the window and scream CLICHE! So I went on reading and liked it. Good for you, you made something recycled look good ;).
Well, hope you liked this piece of my mind, I have to run. Update ASAP and good luck finding a job! XX
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September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooh... hidden memories resurfacing! I can't wait to read more!
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September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice..........Very NICE
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September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter. You managed to get all the explanations in and still make it interesting. This is by far one of my favorite D/Hr stories. And I never give feedback. This is the first time I have because I love this story so much. Keep up the good work!!!
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September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome as always darling. i cant wait for your update... im enjoying this story immensely...cheers*