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I am really enjoying this story. You might find a beta will be helpful with grammar or spelling mistakes, but we all make those and overall, I am very interested in where this story is going. I would never have predicted the outcome so far, and that makes for awesome writing!

I am available as a beta, if you are looking for one.

Keep up the good work!

This fic is far from horrible! I love it! Best D/H fic ever in my opinion. Love it!

I love this story. It is probably one of the only wip fics I have read over and over again. I would love for the next chapter to go up. The way you write the characters are so dead-on. It's great. Please update. <3

Wow umm...ur starting to lose me, when this story started out it was funny and very interesting, now its so confusing and changed soooo much i dont think ill be able to like Draco anymore in this story becuz of the way hes treating hermione i dont no please write more and explain whats going on becuz im too confused!

wow...i totally loved it!

haha...i was on chapter 15 in the morning, and i was late to class today. LOL. it was worth it though, your story is totally captivating. i have a question though. This is all a flashback, right?

Please please update soon! Just found your story todya and I'm loving it!

I read AND reviewed the latest update last night and it was a BRILLIANT and LONG review for your reading pleasure and when I hit "review" it sent me to "Welcome to our daily moment of downtime..." Grrrrr. So, Let's see if I can recapture what I said.

It is the humor, hands down. That's why I read it. Even when you dip really low into dark subject matter, there's always something that makes me laugh out loud, and loudly, or snicker, or snort, or whatever. It's entertaining, the way you tell stories. This is probably why you have 400 plus reviews, babe. You're brilliant.

You really made the war come alive for me in this chapter. I can't remember the exact line, but I really like when you wrote that St. Mungo's was more like a comfortable place to die. You give solid flavor to the war that was exploding around them with grit, horrible displays of cruelty, and boredom. Not everyone battles every battle with heroic blaze and you captured that realistic twist flawlessly in my opinion.

Draco is worrying me. I am somewhat in Harry's shoes now. Draco is off his rocker and Hermione is in grave danger. The 'I can save him's and the 'he needs me's are driving me crazy. Hermione fell into The Trap. I don't know how you're going to pull this one together, but you know how to tell how to tell one helluva story! By the way, is this going to be a happy ending story...?

I can really see Draco acting the way he did when he battled his father the last time. I really believed the cruelty and the inane banter. The torture was no surprise and the way Draco switched into 'cheery mode' didn't either. Great job on that entire scene.

I caught the "Uneventful" bit, lol. Cheeky.

How was your trip?

Happy writing and look forward to reading more!

Joie,
Gloria

P.S. I did dance. No, really, I did. I did the Cabbage Patch. And then I did it in reverse.

SO happy you're back and updating!! I really can't wait to read when everyone starts to figure things out! It's gonna be great!

hm well ok this is what i have observed so far. your writting is good compared to other fanfictions i've read and has a quirky unique style. however as i read more and more it doesnt seem very consistent. i think you might've mentioned this before in your a/n. i tend to like the begining half more because the relationship of h/d is portayed in a lighter mood and was going in a definitive direction and the characterization is more realistic or down-to-earth. then suddenly the second half just completely cut off the first half changing everyhting completely down to the mood, characterization, and even the plot...i dont know where this is supposed to go anymore because it seems like there are actually two stories not one. i dont get why you tried to portay H as someone who is independent and smart in the beggining and then in the flashback have her as the opposite and she supposedly forgot everything that happened in the past and turn to this independent, smart person.and onto draco you portayed him as someone who is suave, confident, nice(u get my drift) and all the while he knew he was this evil person? to sum it up the way the characters are portayed, to me, is always...questionable? does that make sense? well i hope this counts as constructive feedback. hope you dont see me as some lame stuck up person; i only take time to give reviews to those that deserves it and whose stories i like =)

This story is easily one of the best ones I have ever read. I really am just amazed with each new chapter. The way the story has evolved and unfolded is really, truly brilliant. I look forward to updates and am never disappointed. WOW, how did they go from where they are now to the couple joking about shoes and cuff links? I know, they had a bit of help with their memories being taken care of, but damn, it's going to be good! Thanks again for the half hour of sheer enjoyment!

*Malinda