rate_review Reviews

hello!!
Well...what did I think? what did I think? I thought it was very fun and innocent and playful (can a story be those things) I do think that Hermionie is a little out of character (the writing in the journal seems a little childish but mysbe its just that she is so giddy in love that she is being like that??) Its definitly not a critisism!! Not in anyway!! I am enjoying the story so far and cant wait for Snape to make his snarky entrance!!! :-)
I hope that u update soon!! I will be following this story closely!!

TaintedAngel xxx

Ouch. How could Ron do that to Hermione? How long has he been cheating? Plus, Harry obviously knew it was going on. Hermione was almost acting as if she were under a spell. Did Ron spike her pumpkin juice over the summer? And the backlash is about to hit the fan. Great opening chapter! ~Innogen

i really love where this is going not her pain but the story line. update fast so i can indulge myself some more