rate_review Reviews

Interesting. You might want to look at the chapter layout, it\'s a little strange. I think you should also revise it so that Lucius isn\'t a Dragon, and Draco is only Half Dragon. It would make it more believable. It is that Mary-Sue by the way. But it gets a bit strained whith Lucius as a Dragon. After all, what happened to Narssica, and the long Malfoy pureblood line? On the whole I liked it though. Again, I don\'t understand why she was so mean to Draco.

I liked it, short but well written.

I think.....Zalana didn\'t seem very Mary-sue at all, but the imperfections you added later on helped to make her seem like she was being more human.

I love Dragons. They are so beautiful and dangerous. I wish I had one for a pet, I\'ll have one as a tattoo, but I think thats as close as I will get to have one, so I might as well read about dragons in your story. can\'t wait to read more.

I really liked it, Draco as a dragon....hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm, an interesting concept, I don\'t think that\'s been done before, at least not that I\'ve read, anyway I liked, it and look forward to more fics from you!