rate_review Reviews

Wow! I am in awe of your writing skill! Did you by chance have refrences to the Veela stuff or is that your version of the Veela? I CAN\'T wait for the next chapters!!!! Is this going to be a long story? I REALLY hope so because I just LOVE your story. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! I LOOOOVE THIS STORY!!! I am a HUGE fan!!!! ^_^
~Static Wolf

Interesting twist-still borderline rape but you pulled it back in the end. Couple questions-Dumbledore was suppost to spell the castle to keep people from seeing-how does the AT remain out of that? I could have sworn the students would be essentially locked into their tower and all openings sealed...since they were able to see everything, I would like there to be some sort of consequence for this invasion of privacy.

Second, considering how protective the veela are of their mate, especially with other men, how does this bit of exibitionism not conflict with that jealousy? If they can\'t even stand someone\'s smell on her, or someone looking/standing near her, how can they allow so many people to see them mate for the first time? Is this an accepted part of the ceremony, Draco\'s bit of exibitionism, or something else? This aspect, more than anything else made this scene seem like something out of a gang rape story from Asia that you find in the paper now and again. I just can\'t reconcile this protectionism/exibitionism with what you have written thus far in this story, let alone what we know of canon veelas.

NOT ENOUGH!!! I wish you wrote a little more. I wanted to know how Draco was prepaired...maybe you should have included him and his father in a conversation or something. I totally and unconditionally love your fic. VERY TWISTED. When you mention the wings on Sev, I thought that maybe he was another form of Veels or something. Hmm, Sev and Poppy...interesting. Please write a longer chapter next time. I\'ve been waitning for it almost the whole week and when it finally arive...it just wasn\'t enough.

PLEASE continue soon.

Ps. I do hope Either Fred, George, Ron or Harry will be caught watching the ceremony, resulting in Draco hurting them...not killing them. Please post another chapter in the next few days. I am BEGGING here.

That\'s some pretty twisted sh*t. What\'s with all the raping?

Crazy crazy. More please. heh.

ch4

My my what a yummy story . Haven\'t read such a yummy story in awhile. love it , it\'s so delicious and that\'s putting it lightly. More more!

Please go on, I can\'t wait till the bonding comes on. Um, one
thing, are you serious that there would be a crowd watching, thats
a little nasty. Update soon, it\'s going to kill me if you don\'t.

Wow, this is amazing! I really like it alot and the scenes with Draco and Hermione are absolutely wonderful!! You have a great imagination and are a wonderful writer! Update soon!!

hey, i think you should really continue to write, cause i\'m kinda hooked on this story, and its really nifty, so kudos to you!
anon2all

Please update soon! This is fucing great story and I can\'t wait untill you update.