rate_review Reviews

I like it! very...um...interesting! are there more chapters?

I see you\'ve gotten better at the over powering Draco.
Oh god he seems really hot, but give a better descipition
of himself, so others can get the full view. Maybe he was
a little harsh with Hermione because she is always playing
the innocent one. How about you put Ron and Harry trying
to see Hermione or a possiblilty of one of them stepping in
on the mating pair that night while in bed. That would well at
least I think will be good, then the action does start. Please
update maybe tomorrow because this is killing me. And oh
please take my advice. This is sometimes how much I write
for reviews, so bare with me.

NO WAY! ARE YOU SERIOUS? MORE THAN 12\" ONLY IN STORIES. I HAVE TO ADMIT, IT WAS SURPRISINGLY GRAPHIC, BUT I LIKE IT. I LIKE THIS SIDE OF DRACO (PROTECTIVE I MEAN LOL) BUT WHAT I AM CURIOUS ABOUT IS THE FACT THAT THEY WERE STUCK TOGETHER. HOW COULD YOU GET STUCK? I HAVE ONE FINAL QUESTION: WAS MADAM POMPFREY IN THE ROOM WHEN DRACO GREW CLAWS, RIPPED OFF HER ROBE AND BEGAN TO HAVE HIS WAY WITH HER? I GUESS NOT BUT YOU SEEM NOT TO MENTION HER ANYMORE.

P.S. I THINK IT WAS KIND OF CREEPY TO HAVE NARCISSA WATCHING THEM; I UNDERSTAND THAT SHE WOULDN\'T TRUST DRACO TO BE ALONE WITH HER BECAUSE THEY WOULD BE STUCK FOR 3 (3 UNDERLINED 16 TIMES) DAYS BUT COME ON YOU GOT TO ADMIT IT WAS CREEPY. HAVING SOMEONE WATCH YOU WHILE YOU ARE DOING SOMETHING SO INTIMATE. WELL I GUESS YOU WOULD FEEL ANY TENSION OR A BIT WEIRD ABOUT IT BECAUSE YOU WROTE IT

PLEASE CONTINUE. I HAVE KEPT UP WITH THIS STORY SINCE IT CAME ON ABOUT 2 DAYS AGO. AND I HAVE TO ADMIT, I WOULD OF NEVER CAME UP WITH THIS IDEA. HOW DO YOU COME WITH THESE THINGS?

ANYWAY I AM TAKING UP YOUR TIME, SO I BETTER STOP BEFORE I KEEP WRITING ABOUT EVERY LINE THAT I FOUND ASTOUNDED.

WELL GOODNITE HAVE PLEASE CONTINUE
10:55 P.M.

BAHAMA BABE
BAYBEETRICIA
AKA
LATRICIA

THIS IS TRICIA SIGNING OFF.
(I ALWAYS WANTED TO SAY THAT IN A REVIEW LOL)

It\'s interesting so far and you\'ve explained a good deal. I\'d like to know more about Hermione\'s reaction, when she\'s not being ordered around or clouded by lust. Also I\'m curious about that school she went to. A school for concubines? Please update soon.

I love this story and can\'t wait for you to update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

omg. i love it. make him really possessive. oh gawd, veela draco is fucking hawt.

I love this story, so much! Update soon! ^ _ ^

I agree with \"KILL BILL\" the other reviewer. Make Draco more passionate and romantic.
another than that. I LOVE THIS STORY.

Hi,

Wow, I am SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO glad that someone else decided to do another Veela fiction. I CRAVE them. PLEASE continue soon. PLEASE!!!!

Two thumbs up!

Ps. Poor Hermione...if she wouldn\'t of agreed you might as well as made this a rape chapter. Aw! Anal sex is NOT fun.

Wow! Very Hot!

Me, likey, likey, please oh dear god go on. Also just something
to say, try to explain the sex scene better and make Draco even
more possesive because I like my men just that way.