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for Breathless

by cravache

schedule August 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh I love dub-con breathplay - or more, breathplay that the bottom doesn't know about beforehand. So hot.
person CherryCoke
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was really hot, loved the James/Remus pairing too, not many people do that. Hope to see more from you soon!
person Katie K
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good... but you had waaay too many italics in there. It kind of took away from the story. There are other ways to emphasize words without formatting them... if you phrase the sentences just right, people will automatically know what words are pronounced emphatically. But still, the story is good.
person Kaokao
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
o.o That. Was. Amazing? Yes. :) I\'d been reading too much fluff lately, and was getting somewhat tired of it.
THIS, on the other hand. Was right up my alley. You write amazingly.
Keep writing! +pokes+ Pweese? ^^
Unless this is a one-shot. Is this a one-shot? Say no? You know you want to. Or else you\'ll make me cry. ;_; I need more!
<3 Kaokao

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