rate_review Reviews

Ooh! Lovely, lovely, great writing ...poor confused Kingsley, poor jaded Severus...*sigh*...this ship is fastly growing on me, thanks to your ficcy. - and also, me liking teh mention of Remus/Sirius...*nodding*... yes, yes, anxiously awaiting more...

Heh haha! I think you got Snape\'s character down pat. I assume you have Kingsley\'s as well. Unfortunately, I can\'t really say cause, well... I don\'t really know Kingsley\'s character very much. Heh heh. That\'s why it was a challenge, hm? Yes yes. Anyways, when I finished reading the first chapter, I immediately went to the drop down bar with the different chapters listed. But, then I remembered you telling me that you only had two paragraphs done of the next chapter and then I silently laughed. You didn\'t hear me because, well, it was silent. Heh, well. You should play the Galaxy Angels sim dealy. ---> forkheads.tk ---> forkhead\'s flash and CHEATS

FUN TIMES.

Good start!

I like it. It\'s done very well. You have 2 small errors though, you forgot an s at the end of one of your years and you have fir instead of for. Other then that, flawless. I really liked this. Do more, ok?///_^
Thorn

YES! i love you i love you i love you! thank you so much for accepting my challenge! this is so exciting. great start i cant wait to see what happens next.

update soon
mydracomalfoy