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its CUTE, dont let anyone else tell you otherwise, this is like HELLA old, but i'm quirky like that, you wanna write anymore, i can help you beta stuff or just for an outside opinion, well, ttfn, byee!^-^

i thought it was really good! I\'ve read worst believe me and yours was definently one of the better ones so good job!

It wasn\'t as bad as you made it out to be. I loved it, the P.O.V.\'s could have been longer or more in depth, and you needed some with Harry\'s thoughts. It was really good though; the suspense built up, the sex scene was good(not as graphic as some but not as pointless as many). This critisism is only to help if you write another, which i hope you do. Remember if you think you suck chances are more people think it\'s great, and the more you write the better you\'ll get. Keep writing you seem like a natural.

This was great. Remus/Harry...that is one of my favorite pairings. The older, more experienced possesive werewolf with a young innocent...just so tasty! ^.^

Wow! Turn up the air conditioning!
And don\'t sell your self short; that was great.

wow. great story. can\'t wait for more

I wouldn\'t say that it was horrible. In a way it was quite cute. Odd, but defininetly cute. Are you going to write another story? You should (if only so that I can enjoy reading it.) Good luck with whatever you decide to do. Angel Sere