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wow that definitely caught my interest... i liked the glimpse at waht lucius' father waws like... and a young tonks as full of energy as her older self... very interesting darkness consumed draco and lightness consumed hermione, at least i am assuming that was her... so i wonder if you are going to continue on with this story i think it would be very interesting

Interesting. I just stumbled across this piece and I'm sorry you didn't contiune it. Perosnally, I would like you to pick this work back up again since I'm so curious to see how it continues.

wow.....uh.....wow!
yes, hugely helpful review but.....wow......

please, please, can we have some more?

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Oh my goodness! i love how you started it! i especially love the whole elemental theme that's going on. i can't wait 'till the next chapter! 'till then, keep it up.

not to be mean or anything but i read a bit and skipped the rest because i couldn\'t get into it.

BUT... i loved the cowaring lucius to his father

Ooh, this irks me!!! Such an interesting beginning and phht!!! Only two chapters!!! If you wouldn\'t mind, could I take your story over? It needs to be written....

You\'ve drawn a nice yin-yang picture here of the two infants and given an underlying reason for a combustible relationship they would have as they get older. It\'s a nice built-in backstory. I look forward to seeing where you choose to take this.

hi! although this seems like an interesting story so far, i\'m worried that you are on hiatus from vengeance! i just wanted to let you know that i was really enjoying that story, and i hope that you will get around to finishing it! i keep looking for an update, and when i saw your name today, i was really pumped... but it was the wrong title :( i\'m hoping that you read your reviews, and that they inspire you to continue writing. i am also looking forward to reading more of this fic... it certainly is a mystery so far... hopefully things will become a little more clear in the next chapter.

nnt

Very interesting start. You\'ve got me intrigued. I\'m looking forward to discovering where this story is going. :)