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for The Way She Moves

by Frenchie

person Jade
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
I just wanted to say that this has got to be one of the best beginnings to a fic. that i have ever read!
Could you email me when you update?
if you could that would be great! my email is: cyramoon23@msn.com


Thanks so much!
~jade
person Anon
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No, not a fic stealer. I just like to keep the same name at each site I post at if at all possible. ♥ (and I\'m waaaaay too lazy to sign in right now.)

→Rhion
person kratos2
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good story plz add more
person Shadow
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well you deffinately grabbed my attention with the first few words. I just wish the chapters weren\'t so short, but I\'ll still keep you on the list to check back and await more from.

Your writing skill is very good as well. I can tell that this story is going to be a favorite of mine.:) The writing makes everything, not just the plot. :):)
person Anon
schedule March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww.. Don\'t leave us hanging.
person Damn!
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn It Not Another Fic Stealer! ( unless it was the person who stole your fic at fanfiction.net)
person Blah
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yummy, I want more!
person Lyra
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It has potential. Maybe if you lengthened it... added more description (to the room itself) and more emotion it could be a really good read. But that\'s only if you\'re taking the story seriously, and not making a short smut story. More description, and write slowly so that everything is perfected, would help make this a good piece of work.
person smurf
schedule March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woah GOOD STORY! Youv got me all excited! keep going please!!!!

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