rate_review Reviews

your fic is amazing! it\'s very well structured and written and the story line is also great! please please PLEASE continue writing for i\'m terribly hooked and need to know what happens!!!
thank you and later days

Hey, I\'d like to read more of this. Just as I was getting real good into the story, there was no more to read! I hope that you continue with this one.

Continue Please cotinue. It is a great story. Angt and all. I can not wait to read more.

Please update soon. I really like this story. You are a great writer I can\'t wait for you update. I think hermoine should curse Draco bad.

amazing story looking forward to updates!!

I do love the story, I really do. However, there is something I wish to point out. Overall, your grammar and spelling is pretty decent, and mistakes are minimal. On occasion, though, you do have a mistake or two, such as typing in a wrong letter [\"find\" instead of \"fine\"] or leaving out part of the quotation marks. I reccomend you either run over your chapters to catch the small mistakes like that, or get a beta to do it for you. Often you need to wait a day before you proofread, because you will be seeing what you think you wrote instead of what is really there. Like I said, they are very minimal mistakes, and a small amount of fine-tweaking would get rid of them and make it all better. Great story, I look forward to reading more.

This is a great start; I really like the long chapters. Please update as soon as possible!

Well you are setting it up nice but it is excruiciatining <+++ *SP* that i want more so write faster and faster untill there many more updates

Ch 3 - as long as you eventually get Draco \"taken care of,\" I\'ll be happy! He canNOT get away with rape. Hmm, maybe Severus can sneak in and listen to her talk in her nightmares. I hate the idea of her doing patrols by herself, with no one to help protect her if Draco finds her.

wow- that was fantastic! I really hope you keep writing with this story. Thanks!