AFF Fiction Portal
GroupsMembersexpand_more
person_addRegisterexpand_more

rate_review Reviews

for Forced Bonding

by ladyblaze2511

person darknessmiko
schedule April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
XD Draco is knida girly...XD Why does he act like a girl with the shopping and decorating? That was evil how they acted towards Dumbledore~~~~~YAY! I hope you update soon. And keep writing, this is a very good story.

Laika de Linocourt...always and forever Darknessmiko
person makun
schedule April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey im here! lol. wow this was so cool and good and i cannot wait for another. I guess you could have done the whole polyjuice thing and it not have been the actual lucius or something i think is what i read you say or something, but i love the idea of decorating! and that whole embarrasing thing with draco was adorable and i hope you update soon!
person Mel
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello! Good chapter! Love the story. MEl
person Remus\'s Girl
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please bring Lucious back, he was both likable and he was not horribly ooc, this is not seen to much and to lose a loved one near a holiday is horrible, even if it is only in a story i hate to see it happen. I now how it feels so please pleaseplease bring him back.

I do love this story and look forward to reading more.
person Fefs
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought i was being smart... I refused to read some chapters just so i could read them all at once, you know? Just for the pleasure to know that i would have more then one chappie to read.. But then i saw you were sad cause you had no reviews for the batlle chapter. I\'m sorry! I love the batlle! You wrote it with the three more important things: Really powerfull Harry, a dead Voldemort, lots of lights... I loved!
About this chapter.. I liked the possibility of Lucius being alive cause this is one fic i like him so.. well it would be great if he was alive! And this protecting harry and needy Draco is so cute! Please update soon, ok? I want to read more about their relationship getting stronger! Do they love each other already? Hugs!!
person sallie
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
person Lady X
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooohh i LOVE this story. The final battle scene was great you dont need to re-do it at all. In fact i think if you everyone will end up disappointed. At least i know i would. For me first instinct is always best when it comes to writing. If it wouldnt be too much toble ofr you i would like to be e-mailed when you update. I would greatly apreciate it. And personally i dont think you should bring Lucius back even though i loved him in this fic. It would just be WAY to soap opera-ish.
lotsa luv
Lady X
person CrAzEe_E_GrEeN
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice little bath scence. lucius should live. yes yes yes. good chapter. i always say the same thing. i dunno..

e.green
person Phoenix Black
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I think you should do the soap opera thing. I like the idea of the Polyjuice situation, like there being another \'traitor\' that was willing to die for Lucius.

ANyway... update soon!
person Deathinapinkboa
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice. Much better than the last chappie. Keep it going girl(or guy, or trannie)

Age Verification Required

This website contains adult content. You must be 18 years or older to access this site.

Are you 18 years of age or older?