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for Inside of me

by Slytheinkitten

schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey people
first I want to thank you all for reviewing.
I\'m totally overwhelmed.
I hope I\'ll be able to continue this story as soon as my exams are over.
Please excuse my spelling or grammar mistakes but in all the years I\'ve been
a writer I also have been unable to find a beta.
Which is why I didn\'t dare to publish my stories before.
But if there is anybody out there who would like to play this role
*shamelessly begging*
please contact me!!! (answer to Hannah\'s comment)
(btw: do you know what kind of shit you wrote in your message US?Are you even able to translate it? I can\'t tolerate that.)
Thanks, please continue to review otherwise I\'ll stop writing
*g* hey if oyu are allowed to threaten me so am I
^-^ love ya all

person Jaded
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww, man. come on! you are so evil to leave us of their. i want to know what happens next ok? more please!!!!
person Hannah
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I\'m only reviewing in order to encourage you to write more. So do, please. Soon, preferably. If it\'s not too much trouble, perhaps you could e-mail me with an estimate of how long it will be till the next chapter? Anyway, my only bit of constructive critisism is you might consider getting a Beta to catch those little grammer/spelling mistakes that spellcheck ignores. I little mistake can really take a reader out of the moment. Well thats all, it great, but you proabbaly already knew that. Ta.
person storm
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD Kill the evil monster! Please continue, I want to see Harry curse Voldemort to the 9 rings of Hell and back, then back again.
person Ditzy
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really good. I look forward to reading more.
person Eowynselixure
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh you HAVE to update this story REAL soon otherwise I\'ll hunt you down and HURT you!!!

No joke!

*Eowyns elixure
person lightningbook
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG what a cliffy... geez! More Please?!?
person Phoenix 5
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please continuuuuuuuuuuuuuueeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
don\'t take to long for next chapter please
I like this story, I never read one the same as yours
thanks
person cdkobasiuk
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Go ahead. Show me what you got.

cdk
person Kaitlin
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was amazing, pulled me in really fast, excellent writing, continue please!!! pretty please!

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