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for I\'m watching you!

by Cupiditatis

person lensa
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good,
I like Angelina\'s wit and fire, no damsel in distress here, at least not yet. I really can\'t find anything to improve on, but some of your scenarios are a little over used. Still I love it. Keep writing.
Lensa
person mimi
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Scary music plays* Hmm, whom was the person checking out Oliver and Angelina? I\'m dying to know. I was wrongly thinking it was Oliver maybe behind it all. Oh well. Good even if short.
person Teda
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Since I\'m way to lazy to log in, I\'ll be quick and say another good one. As a HUGE Angelina/Fred fan, this story has a really addicting plot.
person tdk
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good, good, good! You so royally rock as a writer.
person lensa
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good Chappie!
I like Marcus, and you seem to have done a really good job giving them a past rather than making them two dimensional! Love it keep going.
Lensa
person mimi
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Chuckles*
person Gigi
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your stories are absolutley rapturing. Hopefully, you\'ll continue on with \'I\'m Watching You\', Angelina/Marcus pairings are so rare, but rather well liked by me. Keep up the wonderful work, and update that story sometime soon ;)
-Gigi
person \"you killed kenny, you bastard!\"
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sure, there is no love lost between them now, but...their mutal disdain is funny!
person Teda
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damnit, yeah I wanna know whom Angelina\'s been with, you tease! You cut off at the best part. Still, all that animosity was entertaining to read. I like a love/hate romance with a lot of hate in the beginning before it slowly turns to love. Makes for a better plot. Keep it up! ^_~
person mimi
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Out-freaking-standing!!! Curious? Why does Marcus dislike cats? Oh well, I\'m sure it\'ll be explained...

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