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September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hee, made me giggle.
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February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i liked it... a lot! it was cute, and the end was perfect!
(although, details abt those hours would have been nice...)
it was adorable!! you shouldn't change it at all...
(although, details abt those hours would have been nice...)
it was adorable!! you shouldn't change it at all...
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April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\"I`m going to fuck my Easter Bunny\"
Loved that part.
Loved that part.
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March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very funny! Good holiday fic ... haha halloween
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March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great little story.
Suggestion:
-you could have started the bedroom scene very seductively, something about a little bunny tail....?
-maybe a fun game of hide and seek, like in the chocolate eggs being hide, but with Harry and Severus
-the first chocolate eggs hidden should have hummed or something to make Severus find them to stop the annoying noise, or something, maybe a little bell sound?
Just a few thoughts,
Love Harry\'s cheek, write more.
Suggestion:
-you could have started the bedroom scene very seductively, something about a little bunny tail....?
-maybe a fun game of hide and seek, like in the chocolate eggs being hide, but with Harry and Severus
-the first chocolate eggs hidden should have hummed or something to make Severus find them to stop the annoying noise, or something, maybe a little bell sound?
Just a few thoughts,
Love Harry\'s cheek, write more.
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March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very Cute....Imbecil not imbicil
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March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\"I\'m going to fuck my Easter Bunny.\"
Omg! I love that line! I\'m too lazy to log in. LoL. This was a great fic! Yay for the Easter Bunny! *munching on a caramel filled bunny*
Omg! I love that line! I\'m too lazy to log in. LoL. This was a great fic! Yay for the Easter Bunny! *munching on a caramel filled bunny*
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March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great!! OMG!! I thought the ending was funny!! MOO!!!
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March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SQueek!
But muh, wow.
Lovely. Poor lucky Harry.
But muh, wow.
Lovely. Poor lucky Harry.
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March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m laughing so hard I\'m crying!