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May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THANK YOU , THANK YOU, ( STANDS UP, PUMPS HAND IN THE AIR---WHA WHO,, WHA WHO) ok,, im better,,thank you ...thats great...i hope you continue with this..great story..
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May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
garbage. this story is not worth following. there are more spaces between text then there is text.
no details. hurried story line. there was almost no angst or build up in the relationship. no growing feelings. no proof of real love.
boring.
i give up on this story.
SLIW
no details. hurried story line. there was almost no angst or build up in the relationship. no growing feelings. no proof of real love.
boring.
i give up on this story.
SLIW
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May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brillant story. I sat and read the entire thing and I can\'t wait until the next update!
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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yet another couple of great chapters!!! It is getting very hard to wait for the next one!! lol I hope Hermione gets what she needs and soon! I can so relate! lol
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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lemons!! Lemons!! Lemons!! Oi Oi Oi!!!
Please?? :-D
Waiting very hopefully for some lemons!!
Tainted Angel xxx
Oh and yes HunnyBee I enjoyed this latest chapter very much :-)
Please?? :-D
Waiting very hopefully for some lemons!!
Tainted Angel xxx
Oh and yes HunnyBee I enjoyed this latest chapter very much :-)
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May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I can\'t believe we all have to wait until the next chapter to find out what happens between Hermione and Severus! Very good chapter, otherwise. Cliffhangers are always frustrating. When you get the chance, and if you want to expand some of your chapters a bit, you should go through and add more description. I know that some writers worry that they will bog down their stories with too much detail, but I think you would be fine with a little more. You have dialogue down great! You did an especially good job with the house-elf\'s speech in Chapter Seventeen.
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May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Happy Birthday to me, thank you for the gift,,,this is the best one i got...and ;you posted just for me...lol.lol.lol.
This story is great,,I hope you continue writing this...its great...poor Hermione,,i totaly understand the furstraion...cant wait to read how Severus releaves her of her problem,,,lol// great story
This story is great,,I hope you continue writing this...its great...poor Hermione,,i totaly understand the furstraion...cant wait to read how Severus releaves her of her problem,,,lol// great story
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May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
heheheheh that was a good chapter... i cant wait in till you update i just had to reread the hole thing before i read this chapter ....and i still love this story well cant wait in till next time ... so love,peace and fanfic ~lol~ bye for now
angel
angel
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May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay good, i would compliment you more but its been a long week with a broken nose and graduation, ok so i didn\'t need to include that, but that lets you know how much i love your story, ive been checking sometimes several tiems a day waiting for an update, you rawk
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May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh you know they have to make love....i think Hermione would kill whoever interrupts them if they don\'t! Lol!
Please update asap!
Please update asap!