rate_review Reviews

Hey Duchess! I love the Remus/Tonks ship, and this has a lot of potential. There are a few things that you could work on to make it read a little easier: double space between paragraphs and start a new paragraph when someone new speaks. It may just be a formatting issue with AFF.net, but in the event that it isn't, it just makes it a lot smoother.

Also, it felt like the last chapter was rushed. Showing us some of their time together would bring us closer to them, so when they finally 'get down to action' *ahem* it may make it more memorable.

Again, good job. R/T forever! (grin)

Very sweet but very short!!! My only suggestion would be to make it longer and add more detail! Hope to see more lupin/tonks from you soon!!!!!

That was so incredibly sweet!!! I really enjoyed it and hope you\'re going to update soon!!!