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April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good so far, interesting that you are
going to chapter thirteen. Sorry my review
isn\'t as intellectual, but I\'m very tired at
the moment. Good night! Oh yes and please
update as quickly as possible, thanks
going to chapter thirteen. Sorry my review
isn\'t as intellectual, but I\'m very tired at
the moment. Good night! Oh yes and please
update as quickly as possible, thanks
schedule
April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I will be looking forward to the update. I love the whole seduction thing!
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April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great work. Please update soon.
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April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn, Now I\'m horney.
cdk
cdk
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April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, once again it\'s... me.
Well done, absolutely well done.
I would have been quite disappointed to see the story end after just 6 chaps, 6 incredibly short chaps if this slight criticism is allowed. ;) No, just joking. They could be longer, but I\'m okay with it.
Nice to see that Severus\', well... snapeishness has increased a very recognizable bit. I like that as much as I like Hermione\'s fury about his continuing approaches.
But indeed, I am craving for the moment they acknowledge their feelings for each other and might with lesser effects of the potion be a couple which you can take into a restaurant without their permanent need to shag each other senseless. Not that I don\'t like that, I absolutely do, but I\'d just love the moment where they confess their \"undying love\" and are happily ever after. They will, won\'t they?
As I mentioned in my first review I am already waiting for more of your truly inspiring story. And just in case you haven\'t noticed, I become a foolish drooling idiot as soon as something is about \"the one true romantic love\". And no, I\'m not gay even if I must admit that I might come off as a sissy sometimes. *sighs*
Keep on with this fabulous work.
Well done, absolutely well done.
I would have been quite disappointed to see the story end after just 6 chaps, 6 incredibly short chaps if this slight criticism is allowed. ;) No, just joking. They could be longer, but I\'m okay with it.
Nice to see that Severus\', well... snapeishness has increased a very recognizable bit. I like that as much as I like Hermione\'s fury about his continuing approaches.
But indeed, I am craving for the moment they acknowledge their feelings for each other and might with lesser effects of the potion be a couple which you can take into a restaurant without their permanent need to shag each other senseless. Not that I don\'t like that, I absolutely do, but I\'d just love the moment where they confess their \"undying love\" and are happily ever after. They will, won\'t they?
As I mentioned in my first review I am already waiting for more of your truly inspiring story. And just in case you haven\'t noticed, I become a foolish drooling idiot as soon as something is about \"the one true romantic love\". And no, I\'m not gay even if I must admit that I might come off as a sissy sometimes. *sighs*
Keep on with this fabulous work.
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April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yummy and Excellant chapter!
I await your next update eagerly!
I await your next update eagerly!
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April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice twist on the obliviate! Your story really is unforgettable!
Cheers!
Cheers!
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April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 1
This is like Ron would have put it: \"Bloody brilliant!\"
I read about love and lust potions before but, to me, your personal touch of the general idea is to a certain extent new to me. I definitely like the idea that the potion \"only\" reveals fantasies and lusting that rested in the subconscious before.
You could be a bit more detailed, not concerning the lemon, that\'s worded pretty good, but regarding the emotions, a language more flowery or metaphorical would suit my needs. But that\'s just my personal opinion because that style is what I like the most about a fic.
I didn\'t find out if the story is completed yet, so just in case there is more in your mind: I\'m already waiting, even if I still got 5 chaps to read.
If it is completed... well, than in a few hours there will be another review following this one and dealing with my overall thoughts.
*runs away and goes on reading*
This is like Ron would have put it: \"Bloody brilliant!\"
I read about love and lust potions before but, to me, your personal touch of the general idea is to a certain extent new to me. I definitely like the idea that the potion \"only\" reveals fantasies and lusting that rested in the subconscious before.
You could be a bit more detailed, not concerning the lemon, that\'s worded pretty good, but regarding the emotions, a language more flowery or metaphorical would suit my needs. But that\'s just my personal opinion because that style is what I like the most about a fic.
I didn\'t find out if the story is completed yet, so just in case there is more in your mind: I\'m already waiting, even if I still got 5 chaps to read.
If it is completed... well, than in a few hours there will be another review following this one and dealing with my overall thoughts.
*runs away and goes on reading*
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April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, and so soon after i finished the others....brilliant timing! LOL!
Can\'t wait for more!
Can\'t wait for more!
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April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You updated! I\'m very happy. I haven\'t noticed any of your spelling mistakes...until you pointed them out. Lol. Good chapter though. Update soon! I want to see what happens!