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for Unforgettable

by Looneyluna

person sandy17lee
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love your development of this oft used storyline. I think you sneaky Snape is funny and spot on. Can\'t wait for more!
person Susan
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter, but you keep leaving us hanging! I have not found any canon mistakes, but if I do, I will email you privately. Love that Severus thinks one quick shag is going to help him. *snickers*. Oh well, the bigger they are.... Keep writing and I look forward to the next one, as always. :-)
person Yabo
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it! More more!
person Susan
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn him for obliviting her! But then, the story would not be twisting and turning at a nice pace, so I will not complain. I am looking forward to the next chapter...Serverus in this one was so typically Slytherin. LOVED IT!
person GirlRedBalloonCornerBlahBlahBlah
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. Please please please update soon!!!!
person JTBJAB
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh man....not another person who favours killer cliffies!

Can\'t wait for your update!
person Susan
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pissed-off Snape! I absolutely love him going at Fred and George. Looking forward to more. Thanks
person daygonna
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
loved the new chapters. cant wait until u update again!
person lovethelab
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Hermione haveing such wonderful dreams about a dark stranger and then lusting after Snape in the middle of the Leaky Cauldren. Only to have him taunt her about the locket being for his lover. But I would have done the job for that price too!!
person Darkness_Enthralled
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. It has a good rythum and the plot is amazing! The only thing I think I can comment on is some of your words are mis spelled, but other then that your story is perfect^-^. PLease don\'t stop writting \'Unforgettable\'

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