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for Unforgettable

by Looneyluna

person queenp
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
excellent ending....i enjoyed it! congrats on a job well done!
person JTBJAB
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh please tell me there will be a sequel! Please please!

This story rocked and there is so much potential for a sequel!

(If you think that i am begging - i am!)
person June W
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 22 - yay, he\'s still snarky!! Hey, he can always talk to his daughter in Latin, since that language is used for many spells. I like the way he tells Hermione he loves her by talking about the potion. And if the baby is sorted into Gryffindor, they can have a son for Slytherin. Thanks for this wonderful story!!
person June W
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 22 - PS - forget the Remus-Tonks bonus chapter - I want to see how Fred and George handle childcare for all the kiddies!
person Susan
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a great ending for a great story. You managed to get Severus to say 3 little words without him seeming like a bowl of oatmeal. It is nice that Hermione understands and loves him just the way he is. Thanks for this story. I hope this is the first of many from you!!
person nesscafe
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry for the delay in reading. Got kinda busy. Well, Hermione redeemed herself quite nicely. Well done on your part. I\'m sorry if I was harsh. Also, I know it was fluffy and mushy in the end, but you really nailed Snape! I love how he still has trouble saying the \"L\"word. I also have to give you snaps for having Hermione slip him Veritaserum in order to find out how he really felt about her. All in all, I like the story a lot! I\'ll probably read it again sometime. I hope you\'ll continue to write HG/SS fics. You\'ve got great writing ability!
person GinnyW
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done! I like the story, it ended so wonderfully!
person Miki
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I quite liked the ending and have enjoyed the roller coaster ride. Looking forward to your next fic.
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I LOVE THIS STORY! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! I can\'t believe how amazing this story is...i\'ve read quite a few S/H pairings and this is by far the best. Everyone stayed in character! Snape didn\'t turn soft and Hermione stayed stubborn, it is like...so perfect, I\'d have thought JK Rowling herself wrote it! I can\'t wait for the next chapter...and it better not end there! Continue! Write about how Fred and George get stuck with all the kids and they loose all their magick outside of Hogwarts and the Apparate powers...It\'s such an amazing plot! I honestly need to print this out and add it to my library of books in my room! After I let all my friends read it, that is!

Keep up the amazing story! Please Update soon!
person Ailo
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve been reading this fic since the beginning and I show have reviewed much sooner before this, but I just wanted to tell you how much I\'ve really enjoyed the whole thing. I wait expectently for the next chapter, knowing it\'s going to be awesome. Thanks so much for a wonderful fic thus far! :D

~Ailo

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