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December 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
EXCELLENT!!!
I look forward to future chapters.....
I look forward to future chapters.....
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July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hmmmmm..as much as i love Hermmy Lucius fics, i find it hard to belief she would faint, just a opinion there lol, other then that good job.
Perhapes you should try to put a little more detail into it, that was always somthing i struggled with, wanting to get the story out of my head as fast as i could i would often skip important charater building.
Perhapes you should try to put a little more detail into it, that was always somthing i struggled with, wanting to get the story out of my head as fast as i could i would often skip important charater building.
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April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have the basis of a very good fanfic, however, I don\'t know about other readers, but really
short chapters annoy me, no sooner have you started to read and get into a story, enjoying it only
to have the chapter end. Please focus on increasing the length of your chapters.
I look forward to a longer read hopefully, soon.
short chapters annoy me, no sooner have you started to read and get into a story, enjoying it only
to have the chapter end. Please focus on increasing the length of your chapters.
I look forward to a longer read hopefully, soon.