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Oh, no! Draco had a miscarriage, didn\'t he :( Please don\'t pay any atention to the people rushing you, this story is beautifully paced.

Ah! goodness of storyness. I love it....malfoy as a member of a band...yay!..even if he\'s not \"part\" of it yet, hes still in it and will be! I agree with you, it would not make sense to have Ian and Draco brake it off so soon, i mean the way it seems is that they really do care for eachother and Draco has liked him since third year right? So if harry and draco get together AFTER hogwarts i hope we get to see that soon...*hint hint* update quickly and lots...heh i\'m greedy *hint hint* I love it when Harry likes draco and then Draco liked harry after...i think its because you have all these...draco pines for harry till finally he get him...good to have the tables turned and i love draco more! *hopes for an update*

I am happy for the update but I am sad because I will have to wait for another. Draco didnt lose the baby I hope? I can\'t remember how far along he is. Oo update soon or Ill hunt you down I just got my gun license. *Gives threatening look.* Grrrrrrrr.

If you had taken the time to read the beginning of the story and learned the goodness of Ian you might not feel so biased. that is the one thing that makes this story so unique is that you love Ian as if he were a regular character in the book and not an OC, as most OCs give you the feeling of Mary Sue. Also there are many ways that Ian and Draco can end it without him having to die the most common being cheating. I mean Ians a cuter rocker so he must have tons of guys and girls throwing themselves at him and Draco is not around. I imagine that the fame and such might go to his head and a large amount slutty obsessed fans will seem more alluring than a pregnant Draco. Also one little fact you might have missed while you were scimming through the story instead of reading it is that Ian is no longer in school. I also think this story is doing a better job of progressing Harry and Draco\'s relationship than most stories do with their \'I\'ve secretly always been in love with you\' theme. So ignore them and update soon becuase it is still H/D no matter how you start it off.

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Goodness! This is one of the best HP fanfictions I have EVER read. I love Ian, thus, if you make him a bad guy, I will....er..... do something horrible. I usually HATE OC\'s, but I am in love with Ian!


Heart Ian!

Draco is such a doll in this ficcy. Ron is a bastard as usual. Pfft

Uh oh! Is the baby okay? Draco? Harry? Oh I need chapter 16!

Um ...
I can see you\'re getting annoyed by everyone remarking that this isn\'t H/D ... why not move it out of this category until you\'ve written the H/D portion? I only came to this story today, (and to be honest I didn\'t read most of the first chapters - being fairly uninterested about Ian). The reasons being (a) you\'ve put this in the H/D category and I want to read H/D, and (b) Ian isn\'t even at Hogwarts (and Durmstrang students can travel overseas on weekends? Makes Hogwarts look a bit daft for limiting its students to Hogsmeade!) so the relationship is pretty blah (this is the trouble with OCs ... they rarely inspire interest when paired with main characters). I can\'t see how you\'re going to break up Ian and Draco. Unless he dies. It seems rather odd to me that Draco would find two people who he loves en desperere one after the other. Especially his old rival ... I mean, are we supposed to assume that Draco\'s years of hatred and sniping at Harry are just wiped away because he grew up ...? I suppose you\'ll have him lose Ian\'s baby ... which is good. Incidentally it\'s slightly better now we have Harry taking an interest in Draco.

Oh no! Please let the baby be alright!!

@_@ OUCH! that was an excellent \"action\" scene ^_^ this sounds odd but most of the time when fic writers describe \"actiony\" (good vocabulary^_^;;) scenes i\'m usually yawning and scrolling down, but i rather enjoyed yours. bravo, i hope you update soon