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for What a Witch Needs

by TCardan

person Dreaweaver
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just savouring that triangle for a moment longer. Er hum *cough*. I\'m really interesting in the beings from \'below\'. What a fascinating idea. Wonder if it\'s a dark magic or something else. I suppose they or it could even be a benelovent being for that matter. I can see how Draco would think the villagers would greet Hermione now and expect rewards for their loyalty etc. I can\'t wait until they get into the manor itself. Wonderful storytelling, my dear. :)
person Melodee
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Neat....very neat. For real, that was soooooo funny! And smuty, of course.
person Melodee
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol ...\"your about to get my \"thick\" fist in your mouth\".. Seriously..I don\'t know if you did it on accident or it was planned but that was funny...Or maybe I\'m just wierd(that\'s probably it), but other thick things came popping up in my mind when I read that. His thick fist...Anyways. All in all, great chapter.
person Melodee
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved the Ron groaning
person yomouda
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
um, what\'s with you man? that was absolutely hilarious, and that mr. edwards \"wanking off\", get voldemort in here so he can join the sex party, saying he\'s sober..
person Stash
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
all I have to say this story is how do you call it ........ interesting..... never read a story like this. Update soon. And also this chapter was umm....wierd

Stash xx
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Perfectly written...I happen to read almost nothing but Sci-Fi and Fantasy with Fantasy being the major role, and you have me hooked. I finished the last chapter and was broken to discover that there were no more chapters. Please finsh Book 6 (which is really good, but only took me about five or six hours) and put more chapters up.
person Kyo
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHAT THE FUCK IS A HILLOCK? I was reading this chapter to my friend while on the phone with her, and we were both like WTF when that word came up. then we replaced the words penis, vagina, anus, and boobs with celieng, wall, door, and floor. That was a bucket of fun........
person Admiring Author
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dude ive been reading the new potter. on page three hundred. So far you\'ve actually missed alot but that can\'t be that suprising. You were close on the ron+lavender (or did u have it as pavarti). Anyways i\'ll update my reviews after i finish potter and see if you really are jk rowlings editor or something. YOU KNOW TOO MUCH.
person thegrandfour
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... Cool, please continue! The story is amazing, there is actually a plot and I just got to say you are a brill writer.

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