rate_review Reviews

Love it. How typical of Draco to turn something like this around to his advantage. Evil cliffy by the way. I can\'t wait for more. I loved when Hermione and Harry were spying too, I was so sure they were going to get away with it and I suppose Harry did, really. Keep going please. :)

That\'s Hot. More please

omg i totally want more! and i hate you for leaving it there!!!!

its a great story idea, and i cant wait for your udate!

I really like the direction you\'re taking with your story, especially bumbling idiot ron (sorry i HATE r/hr). Update soon!

Great start. I can understand Hermione\'s frustration even though I felt sorry for Ron too. These things have to be practised after all. LOL I certainly look forward to more. :)

Oh my, this was quite...hmm. First off, you need to know that the clitoris itself does not have folds, it is an organ. It is covered by the clitoral hood. It does not have walls and is not found inside the vagina. The vagina is also not a \"hole\". It is a potential space. The walls of the vagina touch, so it is not a \"hole\" gaping open. You really need to consult an anatomy book. The fic makes it sound like you are VERY young and have not had sex or just don\'t know anything about the female body. If you DO have sex, you probably don\'thave much fun since you don\'t know where the clitoris is! The writing itself isn\'t bad, but the dialogue is a bit strange. The characterization is off. And the \"Um...Draco\" just sounds silly and not erotic at all. I don\'t think ANY character should ever say \"Um.\"

Please continue...it\'s really good so far.

Damn hon, it\'s a damn good idea. This fict. could be better written of course, but it was still pretty good. I\'m likin\' this new raunchy Hermione and I definitely want Malfoy to show her how it\'s done.