rate_review Reviews

I love the story so good... now I can't wait to find out who they are going to kill to bring ron back...

Just wanted to say I'm really enjoying this fic; however, a few laugh-out-loud typos have escaped your proof-reading. Several times you have a character referred to as a "trader" when you mean "traitor" and according to my dictionary, an "Ungulate" is an animal with hoofs - the word you want is "undulate". You might like to check the difference between "crevasse" and "crevice" as well. And my pet peeve - the constant confusion between "your" and "you're"...
Please accept this as constructive critisism - I love your take on Draco's character particularly, and Harry-as-Dark-Lord is perfectly believable. I can't wait until I have time to finish the story. Well done!!

Magnificent, you really develop the characters in a way that few can. I just spent five days reading this massive epic, and I must say, it's some of the best I've ever read. I look forward to reading anything else you write.

whewwww i finally caught up after the long break from AFF...lol anway i love the whole thing. im going to have to go back and reread the first few chapters again as you said you re did them or something. i hope you write something else soon. i love the storie. just wish snape wasnt such an idiot.

Woot! Cant wait for 62 =D I love this story, is by far the best I have ever read. Thank you so much for writing it hehe.

Please Please Please review. You stopped at a good part. How meannnnn. Please review ok?

can't wait to see which prisoner he chooses...i would have thought it to be pettigrew...but you already killed him off..

When is the last chappie gonna be up!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! I can't wait. I check like two or three times a day.

can't be stuffed logining in, but awesome story hope you update soon - i wish there was more of draco and harry and hermione, hint hint, lol, cool story update soon