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good to see your story again, thanks for update,, dont know how to review

wow ..man i hope they can stop snape .... befor all of the ice is melted .... i hope ron stay out of the way ...please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel

i have been waiting for an update to this story for SOOOOOOO long.
im so glad your back. cant wait for the next chapter.

It's still brilliant. You really do not want to know how low I stooped trying to find out what was to happen.
I even tried to bribe our mutual Beta Narcissa. Sadly she wouldn't tell me a thing. Still you've updated one of
the best storys on the web. Soon please. Best wishes, Donavon.

Finally a new chapter!!! I am so glad that AFF is finally back up and running. I really liked this story and will stick with it till the end, but I think I am going to have to reread the previous chapters to remember everything. Can't wait till next chapter. Keep up the good work.

hehehe I love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hehe I'm glad you updated!!!! its so cool, I thought the part with Crabbe and Terry was cool, exspecially after Terry died and Crabbe was gonna bring him back to the camp, kinda reminded me of Goblt of Fire, with Harry and Cedric. that was really cool, anyway! hope you update again.

Hi Petalsoft!
Absolutely LOVE the newest chapter! Great to see the story moving along and just seeing it updated again is wonderful! Yay AFF being up again! I\'ve been following your amazing story from Day One...it just gets better and better. Love the black knight being a lost Amazon...oh, man do I hope Snape gets whats coming to him...he\'s one power thirsty player! Normally Snape is my favorite character (with Hermione) but in this story...well Snape deserves whatever Hermione and her men give him! Thanks.

I am astounded by this. This is by far one of the best stories i\'ve read here if not the best. I can not convey how good this. Much luck to you in life.

Ch 1) Good stuff!! Noticeable improvement & tightening up of style, word usage and phrasing but how \'bout this?

\"The feel of her shapely body, with her pert boobs pressing into him,\"

Change to:

\"The feel of her shapely body, small breasts pressing against his chest, forcing his body to react automatically.\"

Pert implies upwards pointage: a pert nose. Tiny pointy & tweakable. Pert nipples yes, but breasts swell, either small or lush. You seem to have a tendancy to use very casual slang in description of sexual acts and the bodily equipment used therein. Refine that and then you REALLY grab the reader by the balls. It\'s gotta flow like silk over the tongue, breathed feathers over wanton flesh... Language at its finest can be used to inflict brutally cruel torment or the most sensual moment of your life, when done with precision... it can haunt your every waking dream...

Don\'t mind me, I\'m now gonna drop comments where I feel finess can be be used... Be warned!!!

I love your fic SOOOOO much!! I almost had a heart attack when AFF was down & I couldn\'t find it anywhere else!!!!! You were the one who introduced me to the Triad pairing (?) that I love so damn much... Thank you for this sensual creation!!

*sigh*

Keep writing!! I SO don\'t envy your re-writing AAAAALL those chapter!!!

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Very good. I can\'t wait to read the last couple of chapters. Smut well written and story line while plodding at some times does seem to pick up in the right places. Please post the rest as soon as you can.