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yey... great chappy... dudders isn't going to hurt dicey is he??? cause if he does... KILL HIM *evil grin*
poor draco... i'll tell ya one thing... that part with hagrid was... EEECCCHHH
hehe way to go with peter stinkin pettigrew... ;)

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i love it i love it i love it. keep up the good work. and thanks for reminding me of the story name. in my favs i had it as hp hg dm lol oh well.

Love how it turned out! You're the best, you do know that, don't you? SO glad you let me come out and play, too! Happy New Year, Michelle

Oh god, I LOVE Dark!Harry. That is what sets this fiction apart and above all the rest. Harry's dark powers unify him as your Harry and I never want to lose that character. First of all, his dark magic is dead sexy and second of all, it just makes the whole thing interesting to read. I know fics where they go on for about as many chapters as you have about someone's relationship. You understand the fact (in detail, might I add) that readers need action. I have a very short attention span yet I can read your story (more than once!) and not be able to draw my eyes away! Well, now that Harry has 'punished' his little darlings (Hagrid! you are sick, woman!), I don't feel as bad for Ron. I suppose Draco did desreve what he got, in a way.

The Pettigrew thing was a bit sad but I guess he deserved that too...

The thing with the slaves was soooo damn hot! I love the way Harry thinks! Though, Harry did frighten me a bit when he let the panther hurt Hermione (not really, but still). But the darkness is still sexy, baby! I also loved how Draco liked to watch the slaves fuck, this brung up a whole new line of possibilities in my mind!

On a different note, I'm a bit sadenned that there will be no Dudley/Tonks. Oh well, you can't get everything in life. But, you did say Dudley will get some so I will look forward to that! (wow, I never thought I'd see the day when I'd wana see Dudley have sex!). And I'm happy that Dudley has finally started to trust the house elves. You should do another 'Gaping Snape' and have some house elf fun, lol!

And, is there really anything going on with Ron's brothers? Was Draco telling the truth? That would sure be the twist of a century.

Well, please update soon! Hoping for more 'dark sex magic'!!!

I stand in awe of your thinking and the choices you make as an author. This story is fantastic. I loved the "desk" scene, and I agree about Snape. I still think you're going to have Snape betray the dark trio to Voldy, so not letting him get too out of character was a great idea. Also showing that Harry is a Dark Lord and what he can do to his soldiers was needed. You really are going about this in a realistic manner. I can't wait for more!!! Happy New Year!

this was very very good i liked the hole chapter
keep going and a happy new year to you to
bye bye

You take us through a myriad of emotions as always. You surprised me though, I did not think he'd kill Peter. And I did think Dumbledore would try harder to stop him. As always you have me on the edge of my seat with intrigue (amognst other things) LOL

I felt Pettigrew's fear, and it drained me. And for the first time *ever*, I felt afraid of Harry. For some reason, and I don't know why, it just felt as if I became Pettigrew and looked death in the face. Harry's for real and this isn't a game. I now realize that, Petalsoft. War is coming, and it's stifling and it takes my breath away.
And what planet is Dumbledore on?! Get your mind out of the clouds, and your head out of the sand, Headmaster!
That's why I love Moody! He reminds me so much of myself when I encounter foolishness, from *gasp* foolish people.
Thank goodness for Moody. The voice of reason and common sense. Gifts from God that are seldom used. *rolls eyes in absolute disgust*
It brought to mind Draco's comments to Harry about their weaknesses!
Unbebelievable!
No wonder Voldemort's still a pain in their ass!
The archenemy of the wizarding world, and yet, even when they believed him to be dead, (I guess) they wouldn't DARE speak his name, even!
Not even his NAME! So then, he becomes their archnemesis!
What weaklings!
What pussies!
It's pure incompetence, but cowardice overall!

They deserve Voldemort! Let Harry move to another dimension and just let Voldie have his way with them!

It's the exact same way in canon, and that's why you have such a fantastic story, here. They let that tumor fester until it became a raging cancer within their society, which didn't just put the wizarding world at risk! So take a hint and take a guess!
Life isn't peaceful! The world isn't peaceful! Man, by nature, isn't peaceful!
Just read a history book!
We don't live in a peaceful world, dammit!

Now.... I take a breath....
Then perhaps I'll come back once again, Petalsoft to tell you how I REALLY feel!

(The last part of this chapter, to me, overrode everything else. (The Dark! sex magic & Dudley) It was just that powerful.
Loved the part about the Tranfigured desk/Hagrid, though. Trust me, I did laugh at some point in this chapter.)

wow what a chapter. it was exciting and erotic. i didn't mind the sex scene where harry controlled the sex with his 'toys'. it showed another example of his power. i would have liked to see more punishment for hermione and draco though. and maybe a scene where harry and ron talk about what happened with draco. i think draco is taking too many liberties with ron and harry needs to set the slytherin straight. ron is harry's best friend after all. pettigrew's final scene was needed, but the way in which things happened was not really to my liking. i know harry is a dark wizard, but some of his humanity should show through at least a little. it should have been quicker and painless. the avada curse would have sufficed. it kills, but is both quick and from what we know, painless.

this storynis so cool i love it so much yeah i do its so awesome!!!!!yup well i'm off to do other things man keep this up and i might send u a nice letter filled with compliments^_^ well toodles
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