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for What a Witch Needs

by TCardan

person lilycat
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dudley is such a naughty boy. Wonder what he'll get up to? I loved his description of Narcissa and Tonks as they were in the limo. I always enjoy the witches and wizards attempts to blend in with muggle society :P

Poor Draco. I don't imagine that would make him very happy, would it? I'm a bit nervous for Ron now!

A wonderful chapter. I'm always delighted to see that you've updated.

With regards to Goblet of Fire: Um, yeah. You definitely aren't the only one. Do you do livejournal stuff at all? There was much discussion of that very peculiarity when the movie came out. I personally think that the screenwriter twists the dynamics of the trio a great deal. I loved movie, but in general I don't think that they really nailed the true relationships in this film. There were a LOT of H/Hr scenes that seemed to be implying more than what is really there, at least in my opinion.

Not that I'm necessarily complaining. It was cute, I thought. *dodges flying objects* It just wasn't accurate.
person SpiritOfBeyond
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOOOOOOOVED this chappie!!! cant wait till the next one! you are such an amazing writer!!!!!!!!!!!!
person AbandonedDreams
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
in responce to you note, yeh i did notice how close harry and hermione was! altho it was a good movie, it was almost dissapointing. not nearly as detailed as the books. and i hated the way malfoy was humiliated. but hey! lol
please update more often! im a big fan of this fic but i find its updated hardly ever. sorry to nag!
person Cindy Malfoy
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! I love your story. I'm glad that you updated finally, i've been waiting. I'm also anxious to see what is going to happen next. In regards to the movie, I agree there definitely was more chemistry between Hermione and Harry than Hermione and Ron, and what was with all the missing characters? Anyway, like I said before love the story, keep writing!
person Cara
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I so agree with you on the 'vibes' between Harry and Hermione. Really made me think something was going on between them. Awesome Chappie by the way!!
person Cara
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I so agree with you on the 'vibes' between Harry and Hermione. Really made me think something was going on between them. Awesome Chappie by the way!!
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nope..i felt the vibe too...they were sooo trying to set them up. it annoyed me so bad. i was like THATS NOT HOW IT IS IN THE BOOK!!! STOP TRYING TO GIVE THE VIEWERS THE WRONG IMPRESSION..anyway...i really like this new chapter. hell i love all the chapters...
person Sorceress14
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved the interaction between Lucius, Narcissa, and Dudley and I can't wait to see where Dudley is off to! What will his punishment be? Let it be kinky, lol! Sorry, I'm addicted to squick fics and Dudley needs some love too! I also love overprotective!Draco, it really suits him. The love between these three is fabulous, though I do wish you would have elaborated a bit on their sex scene to give me my quick fix for the day, lol. Who knows? Maybe you'll make up for lack of sex in this chapter in the next one! HINT *cough *HINT* Please update soon!

P.S. As for your comment on Hermione and Harry, I think that the directors are just trying to even out the shipping in the movies for those to delusional about what the books have been implying since day one. The next will probably be chalk full of R/Hr and they will alternate every so on until the true relationships become canon. You can't blame them. I know that I wouldn't want hate mail from an angry horde of Harry/Hermione shippers! But, I was totally thinking of this fic when Malfoy went into Crabbe's pants, I was screaming 'Petalsoft was right! He is bi! Of course, no one knew what I was talking about but oh well :) I also thought the same thing with all the Cedric/Harry inuendo.
person Kris
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I agree with you totally. To me it seemed like Ron and Draco weren't as important in this movie then the others. I mean I understand why and everything but still. The bond between Hermione and Harry seemed to be stronger......Also I LOVE this story. I check it like every day to see if you've posted!!
person rubberduck
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i sense trouble brewing. dudley running off, draco attacking ron, even snape angry with harry. things are afoot. and i like it. this is one of my favourite stories and i'm sorry i haven't reviewed for so long. i like the budding relationship between narcissa and dudley. i can see a lot of potential there. it should be fun to see where you take that.

as for the movie, i agree. there was a lot of chemistry between harry and hermione. in my opinion, there has been more chemistry between those two in each and every film. it's hard to think jkr is going to make ron and hermione get together, but there is hope since harry broke up with ginny at the end of book six. but i'm getting off the point now i think.

can't wait for your next update to see what happens next.

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