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I\'m so glad you finally got to writing more, im so addicted to this story its not even funny lol I cant wait until there is more to read!

It might be nice to hear about who Ron, Harry and Hermione are marrying, seeing as how those three are the main characters in JK\'s canon. Okay, I\'m betting Harry and Pansy, Hermione and Percy, and Ron and Gabrielle, but that\'s just off the top of my head. Dudley is a squib, and Aunt Marge is coming to Hogwarts? Uncle Vernon is spinning in his grave, which is where Lucius Malfoy would have loved to have put him. Why is Ginny so pissed off? She is marrying Draco Malfoy for crying out loud. I would say that at least 50% of the fics on this site have him as one of the main characters. Let\'s see, intelligent, good looking, rich, and she\'s still hexing him all the bleeding time? Catch a clue. Kind of wild, but fun anyway.

i just love this story and i cant wait in till the next update ....please update soon ad keep up the great work and in till next time later

angel

this story is interesting and i find it pretty funny because of the fact that there is such a mess with everything, you have to read everything a few times to get whats goig on, this story is interesting and the odd coupling and the odd family ties sort of creep me out (in a nice way, dont take any of this wrong!!:))

Ch 27 - nice to see you back! Glad your move went okay. Thanks for updating. What a shock - DUDLEY as a Squib, and asking Harry to matchmake! Perhaps Harry can warn the candidates about Aunt Marge. I hope things work out for Rachel Aberfoyle and Viktor Krum; sounds like a good match.

Ch 28 - Harry as head of the Potter family, negotiating with Mr Parkinson - amazing. Has Dudley slimmed down, or is he still pudgy? Laurel might need a picture of him, to be prepared to meet him. She sounds like a nice girl. And when does Hermione get someone? Thanks for the new chapter!!

This plot is absurd. I\'m really sorry to say this but they wouldn\'t have passed a marriage law unless it was to force the integration of muggle borns into purebred society. Otherwise people would get married on their own and in doing so consummate their marriages which would result in said child. The ministry would have no reason to support a law in which everyone, no matter what social steriotype, would be forced to wed. It is preposerous. The writing itself is good but can be far better. It is patchy and inconsistant sometimes, but don\'t let that get you down. Honestly, writing is hard and we understand, but this is a positively impossible and impropable senario. You have to follow up on characters such as ron, hermione, Harry and all the children instead of focusing on the adults. The idea of Molly Weasly and Snape is enough to make one sick, let alone Dumbledore and his marriage match. In all, good effort but next time do something that isn\'t so far fetched unless its a true AU fic. Thanks and keep up the work!

It would be such a shame if you didn\'t finish this story....it\'s really very good.

Just wondering if you were going to finish your story. I know hbp makes this an AU story now, but it\'s still an enjoyable one. i\'d like to see where it ends.

please update