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April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... that was fun.
Ron: Why was he in with THEM?
Hermione: Because someone didn\'t invite him to the orgy...
Ron: His invitation must have gotten lost in the mail?
Hermione: ...
Ron: Why was he in with THEM?
Hermione: Because someone didn\'t invite him to the orgy...
Ron: His invitation must have gotten lost in the mail?
Hermione: ...
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April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*panting* Ooohhh man! I think you should definitely continue! *runs for a VERY cold shower*
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April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant FF, never thought of a plot like that before. Love it!! Can\'t wait to see more if you continue.
Love, hugs and Bludgers,
Trix ^_^
Love, hugs and Bludgers,
Trix ^_^
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April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'d really like it if you would add a chapter or say 40...
I\'d really like to know about that golden glow you mentioned!
*goes to camp out on your frontstep*
Not leaving till ya do!
I\'d really like to know about that golden glow you mentioned!
*goes to camp out on your frontstep*
Not leaving till ya do!
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April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great beginning! Well written with a smooth flow to the events! I hope you do continue! Priss
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April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well you see this would have been a good one-shot if you hadn\'t put the ending with the \"gold orb\" around them, but now it makes me wonder what that exactly was. I thought this was great, very good, but now you must continue...lol I hope you continue, if not this was good, great job. I hope to see more of you writing...
Cheers,
Pamela^_^
Cheers,
Pamela^_^
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April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice, please continue