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MY POOR TAINTED MIND!!!!!!!!!! MY MIND WAS SOME WHAT INNOCENT BEFORE I READ UR STORY NOW ALL THAT INNOCENCE IS GONE*SOBS*!!!!!!!! great story

U HAVE THE MOST UNPURE MIND OUT OF ALL THE PPL I KNOW!!!! I LIKE IT

oooooooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh mmmmmmmmmmmyyyyyyy that story was just so yummy i loved it i can't wait to read the next chapters wwwwwwwwwwooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwwww keep it up.
this story is so hhhhoootttttttttttttttttt can't get enough. but u know what would make a mazing that harry and draco have a powerful child together. but all together this is and amazing story.

Hey girl....are you ever going to update again???I check on your story all the time desperate for an update and there is none forthcoming....you do realize that I absolutely love this story don't you????? Besides I need something to laugh about I've been having a terrible time and need to get my mind of real life for a minute and your fic have always helped with that.....so with that in mind could you please update soon .....pretty please I'm begging you....TL

My wonderful and beautiful authoress I know that you are very busy dealing with your life and everything but do you think you could talk a short break away from reality in order to update your master piece so that the rest of us peasant can have something to entertain us. I really, really love this story and there is just so many times one can go about rereading the same chapter without craving for more. Please, Please, Please update soon I'll be your bestest friend and love you forever.

TL

The grammar is good and no typos, but the description is concentrating to much on the mechanics - it's a bit like a skeleton of a story. And not very realistic how Harry ends up there either, especially if, as you insinuate, Harry is a virgin. It's not supposed to be a flame, just what I think. But that doesn't mean you're a hopeless case. I think you could write so much better if you just thought through your story and refrained from clich

WOW!!!! That was beyond wonderful!!!! I'm sitting up now and it's 3:00 am in the morning but I just had to finish this story before going to bed!!!! WONDERFUL!!!! I was wondering though, if this was the end of the story or if it was going to be continued???? I would love to find out everything about Harry and Draco, even though if this is where the story ends that's still wonderful!!!! *lol* Excellent story once again!!!! Good job!!!! I love how you tormented Snape! But all of those Albus/Minerva images had be gagging! *lol* Not something I wanna picture *hehe* .. but Poppy/Snape .. interesting to say the least .. never really a pairing that I had seriously thought of. But congrats on a great plot and story and characterization! Kudos! Throws H/D chocolate frogs at you! *hehe* ~toodles, I'm off to get some well-deserved sleep~

Please update soon!!! Can't wait to see what happens!!!!! Is this story posted anywhere else?

Your story has become an addiction. I keep reading it over and over while I wait for the next chapter. Please update soon.

Hilarious and interesting. I can't wait to read more!