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Wow. I\'m not much of a yaoi or HP fan, but Tari (Loki Tarien) recommended the story and... wow. This is really good. Don\'t worry too much about squirrel attacks, she\'s gonna be a good little squirrel or else her beta-muse is gonna go on strike.

Looking forward to more chapters!

~Linwe

I\'m still waiting for an update.......

Oh yea, I was supposed to help you, *gah*

I thought maybe Severus could sing and dance to \"Enjoy the Silence\" by Depeche Mode. It\'s slow enough for him, if he\'s not a good singer/dancer but also has a quicker section for him to ad lib some smooth moves. I\'ve included the words for you to review, that is if you haven\'t already thought of something appropriate. You\'d have to change the \'girl\' to \'boy\'. The first stanza explains Harry breaking into Severus\' world; The next stanza speaks of Harry and Severus\' unspeakable understanding of each other and how if they parted, how it would hurt too much. All they need is each other in their arms. I think it fits very nicely. Don\'t you?

Artist: Depeche Mode
Song: Enjoy the silence
Album: Violator
[\" Violator \" CD]

Words like violence
Break the silence
Come crashing in
Into my little world
Painful to me
Pierce right through me
Can\'t you understand
Oh my little girl

All I ever wanted
All I ever needed
Is here in my arms
Words are very unnecessary
They can only do harm

Vows are spoken
To be broken
Feelings are intense
Words are trivial
Pleasures remain
So does the pain
Words are meaningless
And forgettable

All I ever wanted
All I ever needed
Is here in my arms
Words are very unnecessary
They can only do harm

All I ever wanted
All I ever needed
Is here in my arms
Words are very unnecessary
They can only do harm

Enjoy the silence

hi again... i sure hope you continue this one... or this squirrel will hafta attack you!! :P wuff woo!!! (yea it\'s really good)

-The Squirrel

aww this is cute so far. I really like it!

Please continue soon - Jessica

*loads of chocolate frogs for you, your muse, and your poor hands

Hi,
I hope you will continue this story, I like it very much. And will you let Snape and Harry talk to each other?
Please update soon

You\'ve done a marvellous job on the songs and I didn\'t notice, if any spelling errors. You have a keen sense of getting the right song for how the characters feel about what\'s going on. That\'s not easy to do. I love how you\'ve picked out very recent songs, except for Phantom of the Opera, but that was recently redone. lol

While not true to canon, the characters exhibit a flip side to their personalities. The closest any of the books come to this is in Book 5 with Professor Umbridge pushing Harry\'s proverbial buttons. With Albus doing the pushing, in his own incessant way, Harry is again forced into doing something he doesn\'t understand or want to do. I hope he can find a way to talk to Professor Snape about his feelings. It would release some of the tension that Harry is now feeling. Draco and Donovan would also play a role to support? Harry.

Great job of the story. At first I didn\'t think this would amount to much, but man, was I wrong. It must be fairly hard to sing and dance at the same time, especially when not practiced. How does Professor Snape fit into the Room of Requirement? Will he sing in a marvellously baritone voice? Will he dance or at least attempt to???? Definately a funny and humourous part of the story. lol OR maybe I\'m wrong about your Professor Snape. Maybe he CAN dance or at least keep up with the machine. Now, what would be an appropriate song for him????

Please post soon, this is just getting into the good part.

Wow. This is really good so far. I can\'t wait for the next chapter. I hope that you\'ll update soon, please. Keep up the good work.

Wow. This is great. I love DDR and Harry Potter. You put the two together quite well.

I really enjoyed reading this! You should definitely add to it! There aren\'t enough Harry Potter fics that have DDR cause no one else can PULL IT OFF!!! *cries* OoH! You should get Snape to dance! XD Or not, but hey, it was worth a shot >^_^<

i really like this story....are you goin to add more to it? i\'ve bookmarked it so i can come back and look at it again.
thanks for \"listening\" -kittie