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This is really cool. Hope Sev gets better soon. Looking forward to reading more. Hope Harry gets his revenge on Fudge. that crooked swine.

I cried when I learned that Hermione died. At least she went valiantly.

I\'m so glad that Severus was found and that he remembered his and Harry\'s first kiss. I\'m sure the horrors that they were subjected to would have altered their states of being, just a little, like Severus\' halucination.

Great update, now for some healing and hurting.

I\'ve noticed that some of the words in the text do not fit the context, something spell check doesn\'t pick up. You may want to check up on that.

Please post the next chapter soon and make it full of healing and lovely bonding memories.

thanks.

Very cool story. Please write more soon.

This is really excellent! I love the plot so far and I can\'t wait for the next update! Great writing, keep it up!

Update as soon as you can! I love this story!

That\'s a cruel for the readers to end a chapter like this! ^_^ just kidding. Anyway, it\'s a good story to far. I\'ll be waiting for the next chapter.

This is getting good. Hope that wasn\'t Sev. Hope he\'s alright. Looking forward to reading more.

I\'m hooked!!! I found this in the latest section and boy, am I glad I did!! I have no criticisms to make, except the cliffie is killing me! Who is that??? Snape, Voldie, Moody, ????? What will he do to Fudge? Please make it painful and gruesome! I wonder how Harry was able to escape being outright killed by Fudge if he was that determined to take over their world like that? How did he justify what he did to the ones who won the war for him? What will Harry do with the rest of his life and how will he fix it for the survivors.
You know, torture - of the physical or emotional sort, never really leaves a person. And the trouble is that often those who live with/love them never really understand why they can\'t just \"get over it\" and get on with their lives. Those who are victims lose a part of themselves that was very special; delicate and fragile. Those around them who have this core intact don\'t understand this loss and seldom feel like paying the emotional price of constantly trying to resupply what was taken away. It takes a very special person to understand this and love the person through it all. It also takes someone with incredible resources to return to something approaching who they were before.
I look forward to seeing how you have your characters work through this.

That was really painful to read, the part in the prison. The torture was hideous.

Yes, who was under the blanket? I\'m guessing Severus had the black eyes.

But you must update to let my heart rest, in some comfort, knowing that he is still alive.

Please, update soon.

I really enjoyed the first few chapters of this story. It shows a different angle to what could happened if Fudge survived the final battle but Dumbledore didn\'t. It depicts Fudge\'s attitude of the fourth and fifth books. You don\'t have to be a dark lord to want to control everything. Fudge thinks more of power than the truth.