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for The Perfect Life

by FlameArchanist

person roxierose13
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Phooey on Cho! She\'s an evil bitch for cheating on Harry! Yes, I\'m not in a bad mood at all... I like the fic, but I want Harry to be with Draco! PLease? And sooon!
person thrnbrooke
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can\'t wait for chapter 3! People have no faith in Harry. Too distraught to fight Voldemort? Please! I wonder if Zach isn\'t planning something to hurt Harry. Cho is a two timing twit if she continues this. Does she not know that this will hurt Harry more?
person Anon
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a really great start, and I\'d love to see where this leads. Please continue!
person Devin
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice opening chapter, really well done. Hope you choose to continue it.
person thrnbrooke
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
She refuses to kiss him? After all that time? Has he never asked why? Hope he remembered to get that map back.
person hobbit
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s an interesting start, and I think it sounds pretty good. The only part I don\'t like is the fact that you used that nasty Italized font through the whole thing. Overall, Good work ^.^

-SelkieofTheDawn

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