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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hi,good story,bye
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May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it\'s really really good i love the story line and the way Harry disappeared ^-^ can\'t wait for the next chapter
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May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I\'m going to state some VERY minor critiscims before I praise you, simply because doing it in the reverse always makes the praise sound false.
Severus seems a little out of character at times - not all of the time just in some places like where he ran to the headmasters office.
and is there such thing as \'a hurried voice?\'
I wish your chapters were a little longer (but ignore this as everyone always says it to me.)
Now I LOVE Evanescence and this song is exelent - although I have to say I like \'Hello\' more but this song fits perfectly with the story and the story is good!
Trust me its good, I love how Harry hasn\'t aged and has no memory of whats been going on the past five years, now Severus can\'t yell at him!
I love how Harry\'s animagus form is an eagle, so origonal... I don\'t think I\'ve come across that before. It\'s always some mystical crearure ya no.
Anyway update REALLY soon otherwise my geneticall modified potato will come and eat you! No joke!
*Eowyns elixure
Severus seems a little out of character at times - not all of the time just in some places like where he ran to the headmasters office.
and is there such thing as \'a hurried voice?\'
I wish your chapters were a little longer (but ignore this as everyone always says it to me.)
Now I LOVE Evanescence and this song is exelent - although I have to say I like \'Hello\' more but this song fits perfectly with the story and the story is good!
Trust me its good, I love how Harry hasn\'t aged and has no memory of whats been going on the past five years, now Severus can\'t yell at him!
I love how Harry\'s animagus form is an eagle, so origonal... I don\'t think I\'ve come across that before. It\'s always some mystical crearure ya no.
Anyway update REALLY soon otherwise my geneticall modified potato will come and eat you! No joke!
*Eowyns elixure
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May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
not really understanding what\'s going on but i like it!! although anything with harry/severus is probably good!!! please updae more, so everyone can read this great story!!! i kow i ca\'t wait till the next post!!!
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May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story telling style is flowing, I like it a lot. I also like the story so far, but I am curious to know why Severus bolted, shock? please update soon.
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May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay your back! Ooh and I loved the update! Please update again soon
**loads of chocolate frogs for you and your muse ** - Jessica
**loads of chocolate frogs for you and your muse ** - Jessica
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May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Love it so far...very moving. Please continue.
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May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s a very nice beginnning.
I wonder which spel Harry used in the final battle and how he got away. (Harry isn\'t really dead right?!)
Well I hope you continue with this story.
I wonder which spel Harry used in the final battle and how he got away. (Harry isn\'t really dead right?!)
Well I hope you continue with this story.
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April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww that was so sweet. Gods i hope Harry is okay, they can go live in their castle. Ooh... maybe he\'s in there castle? Aww update soon. I GOTTA know! lol
Loved it! - Jessica
Loved it! - Jessica