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for The Power Lies Within

by Hedwig8347

person valady
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So far so good....keep it going.

person GrammarChick
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story has possibilities, but your grammar really needs to improve. There are very basic errors, making the story unpleasant to read. Please find a good beta.

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