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April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant! Much better then the first chapter that you origionally sent me to look over. You went into more details about Hermione\'s parents which was good. Now we need to get the Weasley\'s involved in the next chapter. Maybe have that chapter from George\'s point of view. Good job!
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April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Its cute, but u really should think about finding a beta b/c theres alot of mistakes. Good story line though never did think about Hermione and George together so this should be interesting.
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April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
First off, this is a really good start. I think you might want to check it over though, you\'ve got a few mistakes in the writing, but otherwise it\'s really good.
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April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooh! Great start...please update soon!