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May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was amazing. So deliciously slytherin! You are a very talented writer.
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May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my. Hmmmm
You are planning a sequel there, aren\'t you? Please say yes!
You are planning a sequel there, aren\'t you? Please say yes!
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May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just can\'t say enough about this plot. It so orginal! Great work!
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May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! Great first chapter...can\'t for the update.
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May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i just loved your story! there just arent to many hermione/lucius fics.
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May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the plot. I can\'t wait for it to continue!
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May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! It\'s absolutely fabulous!!!
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May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Draco getting a younger half brother...interesting.
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May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. The set-up, while cliche\'d, was done well enough. However, I think Lucius succumed too quickly, as did Hermione, to the proposal. Still, it\'s well written, and the tension is evident. I like your descriptive prose, the pictures you present are very good. I think it would be a good idea to get a beta to help on punctuation and some word misuse issues, but it\'s still well done. Looking forward to rest!
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May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great original premise. This was a great chapter. Is this a one-shot? I think if your muse was so inclined that this could develop into a great multi-chapter fic. I\'d love to see everyone\'s reactions to this--Harry\'s, Ron\'s, Draco\'s, Voldemorts. Thank you so much for the post and I hope you muse inspires you to continue the plot bunny!