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for The end... or the Beginning?

by DemonBlaze

person Carbon Steel Grinder
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved the first chapter. So dark. *evil grin* It was well written and clear to read and the different points of view were done very well *yaaay paragraphs* ^^ The other chapters seemed to rant on a tad, and some parts seemed a bit odd. eg. when harry is revived, i don\'t think he would say something like
person LPhoenix
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooooh... great chapter!!!!!! OOOHHHH really great... update again soon... i can\'t wait to see how draco is going to react to the new information.
person akuma_river
schedule June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow.
person Death in a Pink Boa
schedule June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice
person thrnbrooke
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh can\'t wait for chapter 4! Draco woke up? So why didn\'t Severus notice? Will Draco give him a chance? How does he feel about Harry? Oh I can\'t wait!
person LPhoenix
schedule May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww.... poor harry..... update again soon... i need to know what is going to happen..
person justa_me
schedule May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this story so far and can\'t wait to read the rest......hope it is soon
person LPhoenix
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww.... draco.... *cries*
person thrnbrooke
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh poor poor Draco! Can\'t wait for chapter 3! Voldemort is really dead?
person RebaWilliams
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooooh, great start.

Where is Draco? Are the Death Eaters dead? So many questions... can\'t wait for yo to answer them.
~Reba

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