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May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MMM THAT WAS SOOO HOTT!!! I LOVE THIS PARING!!!!!!!!!
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May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s okay so far, a little to cliche\' if you ask me. The plot is weak up the fluff is always nice...
Try to have more in the plot and don\'t make everyone to lovey dovey...yeah hope it helps, keep writing.
Try to have more in the plot and don\'t make everyone to lovey dovey...yeah hope it helps, keep writing.