rate_review Reviews

Not a bad start so far. Not that I\'m an expert or anything. A Beta is someone who edits your work. I think this site might have a list f them. I\'m not overly sure, since I eit my own work. I\'d suggest you make your paragraphs a little bit shorter. I know it\'s hard, but I think it\'s easier to stay focused when paragraphs are shorter.

All the best!