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May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, good to read you story!
It has a fascinating beginning, I will follow it for sure :-) And I\'m glad you got around to start writing.
Piece of advice : Make more paragraphs - it makes it much easier to read. It feels silly, but really, make rediculously many, it works *G*
It has a fascinating beginning, I will follow it for sure :-) And I\'m glad you got around to start writing.
Piece of advice : Make more paragraphs - it makes it much easier to read. It feels silly, but really, make rediculously many, it works *G*