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May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was brilliant. I was having a little trouble reading the last few sentences because my eyes were so blurred with tears. Just... wow. And you just end it there, no anticlimactic resolution, just a dead stop. And I loved the chainging-perspective thing. Absolutely amazing.
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May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy moly! What happens next? I need chapter 2!
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May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice story
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May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
At first the back and forth was confusing, but it actually was really cool. Awesome story, real tear jerker.
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May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a sad story *cries* but it\'s such a good story. It\'s well written, it was a little confusing with the changes in scene and time, but over all it was really good.
Reiko
Reiko
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May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, but this fic is so beautifull! I loved the way you showed us the past as well as the present! Please tell me you are planing on doing a sequell? i wish they could make up and be together.. But congratulations!! This was really good! Hugs!
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May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Slightly confusing, but a nice read.
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May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*tear* absolutely beautiful!