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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i loved the story really it was awsum and i no that\'s really of no help cing as how there\'s no critisism but i really can\'t find anyting to critisize. The jizz thing was funny though! i mean it\'s not every day moaning Myrtle chases skeet in a tub. though i also have to wonder... why does she moan lol.... sry just had to say that, plzzz wrtie more chapters soon so i can give u a real revview instead of just prasing ur work
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May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the 2 POVs
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May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very nice story, i enjoyed it. keep up the great writing, u think of very creative things! update asap!
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May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great start, can\'t wait to hear more..
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May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Author uses fun water play and the characters actual personalities. A good look at what must go on behind the scenes; afterall, these are teenagers with teenager horomones.
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May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Smurf I liked I thought it was pretty cool Draco wants to kick some ass andHarry is trying to get some (he should be doing this with Cho ;) that and Ron should be dfending ginny not sitting there like a bitch LOL
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May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Cannot wait for more :)