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for Of Snakes and Men

by bookwyrm378

person mysticsong
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dark Mione eh? That should be very interesting!
person twisteds_mini
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It would be awesome if Ron somehow joins the dark side and meets up with snake!Harry (kind of like a play of fates)... At least, I think so... *puppy face* And I love how the line between good and evil is becomming blurred- go mister dark lord!! woo~!
person REadER
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like your story a lot. I think you should make your chapters longer. Like describe the people lives in the present time. You should describe what Voldemort is doing: who\'s he talking to people, whats he wearing, what does he look like, and other stuff.
I really like to read more about Harry. I mean, what has he been doing for six years? Has he become a man snake. Raised by snakes and understand them A LOT. I think its super cool that he doesn\'t need a wand to make magic. I can\'t wait to read when he and Voldemort finally meet. Will he be Volemort\'s pet snake, and they have this really strong bond? Will it take a long time for Harry to show his real form? I hope so. Will Harry have a really fit body? Tan and muscular because he hunts and trains in his human form, or pale and slim and agile cause he was a snake a lot, or maybe a little of all?
person acr
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. Please continue. WHo is the muggle-born? Hermione?
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is PxW\'s challenge, you can find it and several others on her livejournal here: http://www.livejournal.com/userinfo.bml?user=pxw

This is a great fic, and I\'m throughly enjoying reading it. I like how you\'ve made Harry not know his real name, which is only understandable really. And as a die-hard Voldemort fan, I really love the twists you\'ve built into this! Down with Dumb-as-a-door and the pinstriped idiot!

The Basilisk is a great character, very wise and intelligent, she\'ll be a great mentor to your young snakeling, better than Dumbledore at any rate ;).

I hope you write more soon, this is too good to be left as it is.


Skull Bearer.
person Anon
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more!
person Aisling
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like so far, update soon cya xxx
person mysticsong
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A very interesting plot! Hope to see more.
person Anon
schedule June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
continue!
person icestar
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:thud: :thud: :thud: :thud: :thud: :thud:

why do i keep missing this?! argh!!!

anyways, lovely chapters. ^_^ for some reason i feel sorry for dumbledore... hmm... ah well.

:thumbs up:

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