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Oh wow, I had tears running down in rivers... Loved!

ROAR!!! WANT EPILOGUE NOW!!!! God the emotion in this story is so bloody palpable!!

Awsomse story! :3

holy cow lol... anyway one critisizm... there are times during this story that the passage of time is kinda weird. like you will say something that makes its sound like weekd.. at least quite a few days like the time you wrote about harry spiralling into the no feeling time but then the next chapter you find out it has been only two days. Oh yeah and also if your going to go back in yime from a diffirent pov i think you should think about not changing the pov in the previous chapter before it was reitterated from liek harry to snape... i think maybe you need to organize your timelines a little better so teh stiry flows easier. i get the necessity of seeing both sides but things get a little confusing when you make so much time pass and so much poc changes and go right back into time to show a different pov. i think all you need is practice,, i noticed you have been getting slightly better at that through the chapter. Oh and another thing omg great story line very very interesting .. ive been reading most of the in between wastching dolllhouse and cleanign XD (if you watch the show... omg to the ending eh?) the fact snape is actually kinda nuts is intriguing though understandable from your percpective how fucked he has to be from what he went through though i do want to punch him in the face.. like seriosuly... but the whole love bussiness.. wonder how long he's gonna last before he cracks and remember that oh right he doesnt love harry potter cuz duh he doesnt know him and never wante dto knwo him just to "win" him over urg and barf sometimes from reading taht by the way. like i feel sorry for a fictional charter having to give therapy to snape... *Shakes head* normally huge fan of snape but your snape ... creeeepy.... and and the whole draco, harry, ginny bussiness.... could kind let it end up being a drarry in the end .. pweetty pweeeeeeze. sorry neverr liek ginny and harry together much ... she kind acreeps me out actually... me that into a guys her whole life *Shrugs* but that just me. but yeah cant wait for the next update!

That was so emotional and exciting. I am glad to see an update on this. Hope to see more soon.

I don't know if the story is finished yet but the plot definitely did not go in the direction I thought. I didn't for a second think that Snape was the "bad guy." The story is well written, very detailed and except for a few grammatical errors is put togehter pretty well.

I must say that you tied together different pairings pretty well and I enjoyed the pieces about the arranged marriage regarding pureblood families. By far though, my favorite parts was this conversation between Draco and Harry, it made me laugh hysterically at Draco's rater nonchalant way of saying his line:

Oh I love this story !!!!!!!! I felt bad for harry and I can't wait to see what you write next I look forward to the next chapters thank you.

Lara

ok this is absolutely the most brilliant, twisted, tear jerking, angsty, and sooooo many other things i can't put a name to...story i have ever read. this is definitely something i have never read before and it is awesome i hope that u can update soon with what will happen!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:)

I was wondering when Ginny would show up. Really nice chapter Great Draco/Harry scene.

Chapters 38-40

R!

Love the progress these two
are making in therapy. Love Harry's anger!!! Rarrrrrrr!!
Just can't trust Snape.
He's been such a demented weasel this whole story (albeit
a tortured demented weasel), so I'll have to wait and see!!!

Wow! Thanks totally for bringing back Draco Malfoy into the mix!!!
The much earlier scenes betwixed these two were so hot and intimate,
just like now!!!!!

Ginny huh?! Please let her be happily married with five kids!!! HA!

Thanks!
R!